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I wake up next to you,
But something isn't right.
What happened yesterday?
Did we have a fight?
I'm watching you sleep,
Lying in the morning light.
You seem so peaceful...

But what has gone wrong?
What did I do?
I will do anything,
Everything for you.
Don't want someone else,
Not somebody new.
When I way I love you...
My words are true.

My mind is burning
As I hide my feelings deep.
You wake and sit up,
But your words you keep.
I smile lovingly,
And try not to weep.
You turn away slowly...

What has gone wrong?
What did I do?
I will do anything,
Everything for you.
Don't want someone else,
Not somebody new.
When I say I love you...
My words are true.

Then you turn around,
Look into my eyes.
You see all my truth,
I see all your lies.
You never loved me,
Is what your gaze cries.
I  cannot speak...

I know what went wrong.
Not good enough for you.
My anything, everything,
Just wouldn't do.
You love someone else,
You want something new.
When you said you loved me...
Your words weren't true.

Why do I still love you?
You never loved me.
You never will, in your eyes,
That's what I see.
You didn't have to fake it,
If this is how you'll be.
I thought I knew you...

I'm ready to go,
Leave your lies here.
This pain in my heart
Is all I hold dear.
Since I can't be with you,
I'm going for good.
You won't care, I know that.
I wish that you would...

Goodbye my false lover,
Do what you will do.
Now that you don't love me,
I'm dying for you.
I'll see you down in hell love.
But will we start over new?
Maybe you'll love me down there...

For my love is true.
Lol, I was inspired.
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ZombieSnowLeopard Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
damn....that's intense...I love it!
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andishXD Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
^_^ thank you!
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ZombieSnowLeopard Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome :)
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ObsidianSnowflake Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
i love this :D proud to have in the group
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
:D thank you!
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwhhh, this almost brought me to tears.. >.< It's so beautiful <33
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Thank you very much!
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buttstrong Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!!
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
wow so sad but beautiful i love it and it's amaazing
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
I'm glad you like it!
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Kencir Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
I love this, you have a lot of talent with writing, it's beautiful. I can relate to it
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Thanks very much, feel free to check out my other poems!
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Buhaaghule Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice, but those feelings fucking suck.
Gets the grip, so much pain.
Been there.
:/
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Yeah it's nice to be able to relate but the same time it sucks lol
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Buhaaghule Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah x.x
But luckily I am outta that phase xD
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
Good! :)
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KomoLove Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully sad but great none-the-less. Every word is perfect together :iconcryforeverplz:
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Thank you very much!
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KomoLove Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
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MonsterSalsa Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011   Photographer
Really good!!
And so sad :(
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Then it got the point across lol, glad you liked it.
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MonsterSalsa Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011   Photographer
Haha! :)
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
:)
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TyrArgon Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love it
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Thanks very much!
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matt-emox Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
This is absolutely beautiful! :iconforeveraloneplz: i can really feel the emotion in that, this is really good. :iconiloveyouplz:
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Thank you! :D
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adhdkit Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
wow gripping-ly beautiful, i couldn't stop reading once i started, very awesome =D
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andishXD Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Awww thanks!~
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